Cosmic Dancer
Painting by Elisa Choi Ang
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man meets a woman
cosmic energy in flux
the dance of lovers
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an elegant dance
the universe in motion
cosmic flames ignite
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These are my first two haikus inspired by Elisa Choi Ang’s beautiful painting. I found it on Freya Pickard’s Pure Haiku poetry website as part of her latest haiku poetry challenge for 2020. If you’re inspired to write and submit 5 haikus, here is the link for the submission process.
May creativity and love dance in your heart.
writing to freedom 
Beautiful cosmic painting and you have composed mystifying Haiku, Brad. An elegant dance where the lovers are united into a fusion. Awesome.
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Thank you Kamal. May love dance in your heart.
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Welcome 😊😊😊 dear Brad
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Wonderful inspirational thoughts to your poems Brad.. and loved the Unique style of painting too.. .. May your own Heart Dance with Joy too Brad..
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Thank you Sue. My heart could use some joy and dancing!
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Well I will send you some… 🌈💖🥰
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Thanks! 🙂
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These are both wonderful, Brad. Well done.
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Thanks Robbie. I am feeling a little rusty on my poetry but wanted to write something for this beautiful painting.
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The haiku is lovely, Brad. I hope you’re having a good weekend. Hugs.
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Thanks Teagan. I haven’t taken advantage of my new schedule with weekends off. I don’t seem to know what to do with myself.
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Lovely. Suits the pic perfectly.
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Thanks for visiting Bojana.
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Pleasure.
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Beautiful indeed.
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Thank you Nico.
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Your welcome my friend.
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Uplifting and lovely Brad!
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Thank you Cindy. Dance on!
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Beautiful, Brad! May creativity and love dance in your heart too! 🙂
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Thanks Julie! To dancing!
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Delightful interpretations of a beautiful painting. 🙂
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Thank you.
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Ooh, I love haikus. Well done! Something very zen-like about reading and writing them . . .
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Thanks Kristine. Agreed about haikus.
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Love and creativity dances in your heart! Really well done Brad!
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Thanks for joining the dance Kirt!
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Your haikus are light and joyous! May you feel joy and ease…
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How delightful that you could feel and play with them Ka.
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Lovely haiku, Brad. Perfect for the painting. Some would say that love is the true nature of the universe. ❤
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Thanks Diana. Some days I believe and some I don’t. 🙂
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I’ve moved away from that “emotional” context into one of balance and creative force, but love is not too shabby. 🙂
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Kudos. Sometimes I visit that space.
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Hi Brad, excuse the delay – love these haikus and image!! You can almost feel the flow mirrored in the gentle colors of the painting, and it´s complemented perfectly by your gorgeous words. Gentle, flowing, and speaking of a deep and beautiful truth. Thanks Brad! Wishing you a beautiful rest of the week. Hugs
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Thanks Maria. I’m always glad to have you visit and glad you enjoyed our cosmic dance. 🙂
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Aw, thanks Brad, thats lovely to hear 🙂
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May we dance with the cosmos with joy – always! Love your haikus!
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Thank you for sharing in the joyful dance Pam. 💝
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Beautiful. Two lovers, two heart dancing.
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Thank you Drew.
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How are you my friend?
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I’m well. Grateful for my health and job. Thanks!
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A beautiful passage of joy.
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Thanks Miriam.
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This is great !
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Thanks!
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🙂 you’re welcome . Keep inspiring 🙂
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Elegant all around!
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Thank you Cynthia. May love dance in your heart.
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