Pale Blue Dot
Our precious life on this blue dot
You give abundance and ask naught
How shall we escape
The cycle of rape
Sad I gape
It is hot
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This poem is called a clogyrnach, a Welsch ode with 6 lines, 885533 syllables and rhyme structure of aabbba. The lovely video below inspired me to write an appeal to treasure our place on this pale blue dot we call Earth.
Thank you God, Earth and Carl Sagan.
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Practising humbleness…
Wonderful choice this Carl Sagan!
Have a great week,
Camelia
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Thanks Camelia. I”m glad you enjoyed it.
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A hard form but you did an excellent job. Keep it up my brother 🙂
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Cool, praise from the master!
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haha. Praise from a brother. I had such a hard time with this form!!
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Great job with the Clogyrnach! That get easier the more you do them.
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Thanks Kirsten!
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