Living Poetry
my first dance
awkward glance
fumbling, stepping on toes
blushing, my face glows
hesitantly learning to trust
relax, spin and thrust
flowing with the music of life
letting go of struggle, pain and strife
is god moving me
or am I moving thee
who cares, I dance with glee
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You’re welcome and thank for visiting mine. blessings, Brad
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Thank you dear brad 🙂
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I was just thinking about living poetry! Beautiful Brad, Beautiful!
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Thanks my poetry muse!
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Oh that really made me smile . . .Thank you ❤
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Wonderful Jode! Thanks for visiting my little poetry patch. May your life be living poetry, XD
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literature is LIFE, in general and poetry in particular… 🙂 continue to write, young man because:
”We don’t find loneliness, we simply create it. Imagine being at the bottom of a hole, in almost total isolation and discovering that only writing will save you… Writing also means to shut up. To be quiet, to scream silently. Writing has never abandoned me… Don’t do anything else but just write!”(Marguerite Duras – Writing)
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Nice quote and thanks for the encouragement Melanie. Writing has been one of my pleasures the last few years, but I don’t feel a burning passion for it, merely a joy of sharing my poems and inspiring stories. In fact, It’s been a way of connecting with folks on the web while I do my introvert phase. I rarely connect in person anymore and I’m far from being a young man, but appreciate tapping into those early memories of dance, dating and discovering life.
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Your poem about dancing reveals the desire for freedom which is great. If I could give you an advice, I would recommend you to focus on rhythm. Both dancing and poetry need it.
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Hi Julie, Thanks for the feedback. I certainly yearn for freedom and already enjoy dancing and poetry.
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